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But Baby, it's all because... by ~Amandane:iconAmandane:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I see you...
as clear as day.
You see me...
as bright as the sun.

I hear you...
like an orchestra of bells.
You hear me...
like the birds of spring.

I feel you...
as my hands intertwine
with yours.
You feel me...
as your arms tighten
around my waist.

I smell you...
as I press my nose
to the base of your neck
and run it down your chest.
You smell me...
as you twirl my hair and
send that perfume scent
wafting around you.

I taste you...
as my lips fit against your
sun-kissed skin.
You taste me...
as your lips manage to
find and clasp together
with mine.

But Baby, it's all because we're in sync.
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Author's Comments

Surprisingly, yes, I do tend to write/type out some things I have stored in my head. Normally, I don't post an of my poems because I simply dislike them. This is an exception to that. I've had this idea in my head for a while now, but I didn't really get it typed out until this morning. Haha. I decided to upload it because one of my friends told me that I should, and I'm quite found of this poem, for once.

Sadly, I couldn't fit the whole title in the title-section when I was submitting this. It's full title is the last line, "But Baby, it's all because we're in sync.". That's okay, though. I'm still happy with it.

:D Comments, criticism, favorites, etc. are welcome. <3

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~Zinkdeh Dec 27, 2008, 12:12:38 PM
Love it babe<3
You need to upload more of your poems. :]

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Edward Cullen, Sexier Then You Since 1901 ;333
:iconamandane:
~Amandane Dec 27, 2008, 12:15:43 PM
Haha. Eventually. <3
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=Birthstone Dec 27, 2008, 6:30:01 PM
Love it. Very soft and nice

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Learn more nature\'s geometry please go here
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:iconamandane:
~Amandane Dec 27, 2008, 6:33:03 PM
Thank you. :heart: Glad you like it. :)
:iconsadicticvamprie:
~sadicticvamprie Dec 27, 2008, 8:39:45 PM
i love it. seriously reminds me of my boyfriend :3

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Let's be lonely together.
:iconamandane:
~Amandane Dec 28, 2008, 10:00:25 AM
x3 Thanks so much. <3
:iconsadicticvamprie:
~sadicticvamprie Dec 28, 2008, 3:44:17 PM
you're welcome x3

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Let's be lonely together.
:iconmindy29:
~Mindy29 Jan 1, 2009, 11:03:18 AM
That was deep! Very nice. :) It's cool how you mix it in with italicized lines and such. And the last line really stands out, not because it's put by itself but because it just sounds as deep as the other stanzas.

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.My MangaBullet.
:iconamandane:
~Amandane Jan 1, 2009, 1:44:39 PM
Thanks. <3 I italicized them because it looked better to me. Haha. :hug:
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